Monday, February 23, 2009

GOODBYE....

As I sit on this memorable place
It surely reminds me of your face.
On this place you said goodbye
On this place I said I’ll die.

You stood right and end up everything
Without letting me say anything.
But then it’s just aright
At least we didn’t end up fight.

I gave up and set you free
It is for you, not me.
I haven’t seen your real smile
With me, for a long while.
It’s not what I wished for
To make you happy is I aim for.

So I let go and give up
And still, I’m here looking up.
Reminiscing those moments with you
But still I have nothing to do.
Quickly, it was lost in a moment.
Coz I know we’re not meant.
Those times didn’t last
Coz we took love, so fast.

So much to take this pain
Without any love to gain.
This terrible heartache
Make my smiles fake.
So much lies for this heart
So it was broken apart.

Words will no longer be right

Though I stood up and fight.

For the times we spent together
And for the times I wished forever.
For the memories left inside
And for the feelings I used to hide.
For the thoughts that’s still here
And for the words you said clear.
For the promises we used to swear
And for the love we spend and share.

In this place I’ll get rid and forget
Without thinking, I might regret.
With a final kiss I’ll say goodbye
I’ll be leaving this place without a cry.

Now, I’ll let these memories fly
As high as heavens, and then goodbye

6 comments:

Anonymous said...

the girl must be stupid to leave a guy like u. loyal guys are really a priced and rare commodity these days.and u seem to be a really sensitive, loyal and honest person. i have tried looking for a loyal guy for myself a loyal guy for myself always and i think every girl dreams of such a guy as u are. i would say the girl was a loser who let a gem like u slip from her hands. but u shouldn't regret, u must be deserving a better and loyal and a real nice girl who can know ur worth. anyways, this is a great post. keep up the awesome work. i loved this one especially.

Unknown said...

i agree with neha bro. its that girl's loss. she lost a gem that she should have treasured all her life. she would realise what she has lost

mayank puri said...

umm... i won't comment about her..!! becoz i still wish her all the best..!! but ya i agree with u 2... LIFE HAS TO GO ON..!!
:)

ritika singh said...

why would a girl want to lose a guy like u? i pity her. she must have been a fool that she let a diamond slip out of her hands.

but really a nice poem man. it was really amazing. u are a magician at putting ur thoughts into words in an amazing fashion. applause for u

maddy said...

any girl would be stupid to lose u man.

neetu said...

yaar, this poem of urs set me in tears...
aisa laga ki dil mein crack ho gaye..aur kuch baahar aa raha hai..

kuch tha..jo bhul gayi thi...fir se yaad aa gaya...!!

i truly agree wid neha,ritika,pradeep,maddy....
but i beleive..."All it happens, it happens for the good" :)

so dont worry...
"ACCHE LOGON KE SAATH ACCHA HI HOTA HAI,BHALE DER SE HI KYU NA HO!"