Tuesday, January 15, 2008

life rocks on every moment...!!!!

this is a creation of my friend PUNEET...... he didn't have a blog, so asked me to display it here...!!!! hopefully all would like this also, juzz as i did :-)

Life rocked every moment, as I used to spend every moment on the rocks,
Life was a smile, it was happiness, it was adventure, and in short it was great..
and Now it’s all about my shoulders carrying the weight……
The Weight of my parent’s expectation;
the weight of the faith of my friends in me.
life has put a question mark on me?;
Am I the one to whom god wants to show what life is, or life wants to show who god is,
Confused between these,here I am, standing in a mist; all hidden….
Seeking is what I have always done;
Thinking; life is to seek what I need….
I need friends,I need close ones,I need love;
I got all but lost it too, it just took a split of a second….
Second is what matters a lot, life changes again n again,
Life again played hide n seek, I m seeking what god wanted to hide….
Hidden is my future, my life, my expectations, my dreams,
Dreams are what I need,and fulfilling then is what I look forward to….
I am looking towards you with my folded hands;
shower the blessings that I dream of,
I dream off living life;
living life to fulfill my friend’s faith in me,
my parents, satisfied and their expectations fulfilled,
Expectation of the one who is in me, as my soul.
Soul Is what I live for , I live for you my love……
Love is what i searched for,
here n there, Here n everywhere,
it came but I don’t know where it went;
i Repent that's why I don’t have the courage to fight n hold things back,
Broken is my back, just need some one to back me up,
Up then i ll come n higher i ll go ,
where no one would have a control….
Higher n higher is what I dream off ,
but here I am just calling everything off.
Off I go in the darkness,
off I go where no one is there;
just me hiding from god so that he doesn’t find me,
n take away the darkness n leaves me broken in front of all…

6 comments:

mansi said...

no coments i wld say......

Unknown said...

too good puneet...a gud competition 4 mayank

Unknown said...

too good puneet...a gud competition 4 mayank

Puneet said...

THANKS DEAR !~~!

mayank puri said...

arre in poetry there is juzz no compitetion...it's all abouts ur thougts and feelings..!! and vaise bhi puneet is juzz like a brother..!! bhayion se kaisa competition..!!

and ya puneet i must say this is one of the really rockin' and awesome poems that i have seen...!!! much better than most of mine bro.. KEEP WRITIN'

Unknown said...

ahum ahum....rocking post puneet...kuch aisa b hai jo tum dono me se 1 karta ho n dusra na karta ho???now plez dont take me wrng...but u guys rock